Teachers opinions about my Poems!
I write poems and show them to my friends but last Tuesday I showed one of the poems to couple of teachers. Ms. C Ms. L, Ms. T, Ms. P, Ms. J, Mr. Dw and Mr. W told me that I write very good and Mr. Dw wanted to know about whom did I wrote that “heart breaking” poem. He did not believe me when I told him that I wrote it for no one….That is true! On anther table I asked Mr. Do to read it and he said “It’s so deep”. Mr. Dn and Mr. M who were at the same table were discussing something and had no time to read it.
In Wednesday and through my investigations I knew that Mr. K, the one who run the TOEFL exams in AD campus, was at the university! I wanted to meet him and see how different he is from Mr. Dn the one who run the TOEFL exams at my university. I went to see S, Mr. Dn’s assistant, at the end of the day because she wanted to read some of my poems….after she read, she said that it felt what I was trying to say so I thanked giving her a copy of the poem.
I saw Mr. K in Mr. Dn’s office, so I went there and greeted him for the very first time! He was really friendly so I asked him to read my poem, he was impressed and gave corrections for some of the vocabulary. Then it was Mr. Dn’s turn, I was pretending to be mad at him because he did not read my poem in the previous day, who liked it! I said my goodbyes to them and wished that I could meet Mr. K again
In Wednesday and through my investigations I knew that Mr. K, the one who run the TOEFL exams in AD campus, was at the university! I wanted to meet him and see how different he is from Mr. Dn the one who run the TOEFL exams at my university. I went to see S, Mr. Dn’s assistant, at the end of the day because she wanted to read some of my poems….after she read, she said that it felt what I was trying to say so I thanked giving her a copy of the poem.
I saw Mr. K in Mr. Dn’s office, so I went there and greeted him for the very first time! He was really friendly so I asked him to read my poem, he was impressed and gave corrections for some of the vocabulary. Then it was Mr. Dn’s turn, I was pretending to be mad at him because he did not read my poem in the previous day, who liked it! I said my goodbyes to them and wished that I could meet Mr. K again


2 Comments:
At 5:37 AM,
Gary said…
I thoroughly enjoyed your poems SA, and I think you should definitely write more!
By the way, I changed my url:
http://www.gton3.blogspot.com
seeya
Gary
At 10:20 AM,
Pure Dream said…
yup.. it was nice poems and looking for others
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